I'm not sure if I see any mistakes, and I am not sure if I like it. I guess it's too simple. You might want to also make the letters without those dots, they won't be visible when the picture is scaled down.
Sooo I don't like how it's too simple, and I don't like the dots. Aaand I like the colors. Sorry for being rude, I'm only starting to comprehend how to talk to people.
Asandir
I love it :o
DESHIEL
Well originaly it was supposed to be heavy moded with graphics and effects like the previous one, but then I realised that I actualy prefer simplicity much more. :)
I'm glad you like this, but don't be shy to point out some inconsistencies ;)