I admire your artistry, but the story didn't strike home here. Dark noirish cliché and a pairing of Tracer & McRee, the last guy I would pair her up with started to dim my interest in the plot, but I continued watching it, perhaps merely out of respect for the quality of the whole project and the effort that must have been given to it.
Formerly wanted to give 4/5 but decided to go with 4.5/5, because that sex scene made me giggle. Both Tracer and Mcree still wearing thier signature accesory during sex made me say to myself "Oh wait love, put that hat on so I can fuck that hawt cowboy guy from Overwatch... Alright love, but you gotta put on those skying glasses too, so I can plow that hyperactive kidboy from Overwatch too" hehe
Final statement: It was good. The plot might have not been what I wanted to see, but that is purely subjective to my opinion. I am sure that the next person will absolutely contrast me and love this in its entirety.
Pretty sweet. Can tell that you could have brought this into amazing height had you wanted to invest more time in it.
Nice but this can be better apreaciated in the art portal as an animated image, minus the sound.
That shows my greeness here. Didn't know you could do that. I may make that happen. Thanks!
Ur that guy that has big skills but always somewhat fucks up the females. First fairy tail, now the lipstick on Yoruichy. It ruined the immersion for me.
Aside from that I liked the story and progression. I like it when stuff has alittle bit of story in it. 100% fucking is boring, glad you focus on story too.
So how did that conversation go? "Hi piniteen I just happened to record myself moaning to your latest flash whada ya think" lol
yep. pretty much like that
Since nothing realy happens, this feels like an animated voiceacting reel
Towards the end, there is some animation. My goal was to focus more on funny dialogue than different animation since animation takes a lot of time just to get a joke across. ESPECIALLY if I want the animation to have a lot of quality. BUT I can understand that watching the same background can be a bit more dull than doing a video full of movement. However, I think great animations are about more than just what's moving. So I experimented on that. Thanks for the comment.
3 stars for the lack of narrative.
I'll have to focus on narrative on another game.
Ye but your original draft didn't look like Lucy at all.
idk. i should have recieved these kind of reviews on my previous lucy drawing here in NG . it's the same face i used. infact i still have it in my library.
Should have sent son to keep Nene company ;)
Ah finaly a pico day movie! Thumbs up!
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