SHADAP TEO! (lol jk)
I have to agree with Teo on the MASTERING & Composition of the track.
I already told you on skype that this track sounds like one giant intro.
You've changed/resapled several things since we have discussed the original version, however you didn't alter the key progression. and I remember warning you that some people will notice and they will react to it. (Teo did)
However, unlike TitsyTeo I find the choice of the drums quite smart, especialy for the fact that it sympthatises with that electric guiltar.
I believe that the aforementioned guitar sounds good, but it shouldn't have been played alone. It should have been supported by something else.
Overall this track is a good showcase of some interesting sounds.